Thesis:The restaurant shows a great diversity of different types of food they serve to our community.
Sweet Tomato reflects on the diversity of Houston because it attracts a wide range of people, serves a wide variety of appetizing foods, and has well-mannered employees.
.Secondly, they serve a wide variety of different types of appetizing foods that you will like when you try it. The aroma of the delicious food makes you feel as if you are in a heaven of food. As I enter the buffet, I smell the wonderful fragrance of the different varieties of food in the atmosphere. There are extravagant foods that I see as I walk around looking at dishes. The food there is made from scratch and shows the great taste and hard effort the cooks put into the food for the people. They serve specialty soups that taste as fresh as the scent of a freshly cleaned house. Every month, there are different types of salad, pasta and other entrées to mix up the food so people will not get tired of eating there. The delicious food that the cooks make are for us to enjoy eating and to come back again to have more of what they make.
you could describe the smells in the air better and what kind of extravagant foods you see. However, your thesis is nice, to the point, and easy to follow. all you lack is description, if you get some more in then this would be really good.
ReplyDeleteI've never been there before but it seems like you enjoy the food. It is a good topic and you have a clear thesis, but you should use more description in the body paragraph. You also did a good job in using sense of smell.
ReplyDeleteI have never been here before so the description of the place actually made me want to go and eat. Having nice empolyees is always a plus for me which is a another great reason why i would love to go. I hate going to resturants that have rude employees. Your description if the place and how it smells when you walk in got my stomach rumbling. Good Job!
ReplyDeleteYour thesis is very on point and it informs the reader the type of content you are going to include for the description of Tasty Sweet Tomatoes. You have the particulars but you could have used more vivid verbs in order to get the reader to experience what you experienced in the restaurants atmosphere. You do mention the smell the food provides but by providing what type of would make the body paragraph more interesting and lively.
ReplyDeleteIf only you had some descriptive info of the actual food, then it would of been more effective in letting me know the smells in the restaurant.
ReplyDeletePerhaps give detail of a specific plate you love?